A Workshop Assignment

Let's try a huitain:

A huitain  contains 8 lines, 8 syllables per line
Rhyme Scheme ababbcbc

 An Example:

Opening the Gate

Smiling frozen, glaring glass eyes
your face is winter running late.
Silent isolation, good-byes,
my yearning for kisses must wait
for you to remember how fate
prevails when love breaks tender hearts,
opening rigid white dream gates,
setting words free with love-fresh starts.

Copyright 2007 JO Janoski