Terry McDermott

August 18, 2007 - Ocean Window

Window

To the ocean

Brings in the salty winds

A passage from confinement to

Freedom

 

This is a cinquain based on the picture, of the girl looking out the window, which Jo posted in the workshop.

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August 18, 2007 - ocean window

Posted by paisley
it seems we all had a bit of a melancholy take on this one....
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August 18, 2007 - Untitled Comment

Posted by JO
JO
Yes, melancholy, but instead of lost love like I did, this one is about freedom. Unique topic. Nice cinquain.
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August 18, 2007 - Untitled Comment

Posted by Shirley
Shirley
I like this one Terry.
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