Ocean Window - Terry McDermott

Terry McDermott

Window

To the ocean

Brings in the salty winds

A passage from confinement to

Freedom

This is a cinquain based on the picture, of the girl looking out the window, which Jo posted in the workshop.

Posted by paisley

it seems we all had a bit of a melancholy take on this one....

Posted by JO

JO
Yes, melancholy, but instead of lost love like I did, this one is about freedom. Unique topic. Nice cinquain.

Posted by Shirley

Shirley
I like this one Terry.

I mainly write structured non-rhyming poetry