blue
August 1, 2007
blue
This is how you form the cinquain:
Line 1: 2 syllables
Line 2: 4 syllables
Line 3: 6 syllables
Line 4: 8 syllables
Line 5: 2 syllables
without
shimmering shades
of blue, your eyes would not
sparkle, nor would my soul have wings
your eyes
until
i understand
that to you, love is pain,
my reflection shows me your love
black blue
This is how you form the cinquain:
Line 1: 2 syllables
Line 2: 4 syllables
Line 3: 6 syllables
Line 4: 8 syllables
Line 5: 2 syllables
without
shimmering shades
of blue, your eyes would not
sparkle, nor would my soul have wings
your eyes
until
i understand
that to you, love is pain,
my reflection shows me your love
black blue
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Untitled Comment
Ooooh, you've taken quite naturally to this form. Great entry in the challenge!
published by jojanoski
at 04:49 AM, August 2, 2007 | Link | |
Untitled Comment
I'm new to this, too, but I feel your pain... especially after reading the prose above the poem.
published by Bubba
at 03:06 PM, August 2, 2007 | Link | |