August 4, 2007
Pseudo-Dodoitsu

In response to Paisley's writing challenge to write a dodoitsu (a Japanese fixed folk song form composed of 4 lines of 7,7,7,7,5 syllables, respectively. I offer up the following. Okay... but remember, you asked for it, I won't be held responsible for the results:

Write it right or write it wrong,

Write it short or write it long,

Write it weak or write it strong,

Take time to write it. 

( Yes, I realize it's not supposed to rhyme. What can I say? I'm an amateur, get over it...)                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            

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