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JO JANOSKI resides in Pittsburgh, PA, USA with her husband, Ron.
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Daybreak
A Musecrafters Writing Workshop Challenge
 Daybreak by Tashami Acura
Daybreak
Blushing hues
Mumble shy beauty
Steeped in morning's groggy hymn
Blessed stillness before sun intrudes
Rays shouting, bumping, staring
Quietude banished
By fury.
Copyright 2007 JO Janoski
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Posted: 10:20 PM, November 3, 2007 in Poetry |
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paisley
jo yours is much more poetic.. i really like it.... |
Posted by paisley at 04:21 AM, November 4, 2007 |
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| Like the water color, you capture the spirit of morning and its promise of the day. thanks |
Posted by hfurness at 09:26 AM, November 4, 2007 |
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| I can hear the crescendo of mounting fury poised to blast forth. Very nice... |
Posted by Bubba at 10:16 AM, November 4, 2007 |
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Beautiful!
Shirley
I love this Jo. This is definitely a form you are good at. |
Posted by Shirley at 01:32 PM, November 4, 2007 |
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