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JO JANOSKI resides in Pittsburgh, PA, USA with her husband, Ron.
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Morning
A septet
Morning
Night blushes
prodded by tremors
of gray, pink, blue excited
sprinkles of morning's vibrant rushing
before hot floods of yellow
wash across it all
in glory.
Copyright 2007 JO Janoski
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Posted: 07:33 AM, October 1, 2007 in Poetry |
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septet
paisley
so visually pleasing.. very good..... |
Posted by paisley at 08:30 AM, October 1, 2007 |
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Bubba
| Okay, as a non-poet, I must ask a question... how would this sound or read any differently if not set up in septet form? I didn't perceive any visual clues that made each line unique entities or stand-alone sequences. I honestly hadn't thought about how poetry 'looks' on the page as being important without an emotional trigger built in... that being said, I like it very much and respect your abilities in creating it. |
Posted by Bubba at 10:28 AM, October 1, 2007 |
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| I too am totally impressed by your command of form. And the image works so well. I can see it and each line is important the way it stands. You make it look so easy. |
Posted by hfurness at 01:13 PM, October 1, 2007 |
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Hello
I like it very much. It's very nice.
:)Riza |
Posted by RMCAMACHO at 09:01 PM, October 2, 2007 |
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