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JO JANOSKI resides in Pittsburgh, PA, USA with her husband, Ron.


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Hesitation - (A cinquain)

A workshop prompt:

Hesitation

Bright greens
Hesitating
A smile fading away
While Fall's insouciant giggles
Prevail
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Copyright 2007 Jo Janoski, Poet Laureate of Pennsylvania™ 2007

Posted: 08:28 AM, September 26, 2007

a cinquain!!!!!

paisley
oh jo.. this is perfect... i need to pull out my "forms" and work them in on some of this as well!!!!!!

Posted by paisley at 08:56 AM, September 26, 2007

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The only word I might take even a little issue with is 'prevail'... to me, it entails activity whereas I've always associated insouciance with nonchalance and/or indifference. I suppose it's possible to prevail passively... ha! No matter, it's very nice...

Posted by Bubba at 12:09 PM, September 26, 2007

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Very cool.. I see a face as well as a season changing. You got that form and function thing down again. a fan

Posted by hfurness at 01:29 PM, September 26, 2007

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Beautiful

dermott
Beautiful wording.

Posted by dermott at 05:32 AM, September 27, 2007

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