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JO JANOSKI resides in Pittsburgh, PA, USA with her husband, Ron.
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Dark and Stormy Night Challenge
For the Musecrafters workshop "Dark and Stormy Night" prompt:
Maelstrom
It was a dark and stormy night
as starry vapors gathered
under a clouded moon
whirling and twirling
formulating
a maelstrom of discontent.
Eerie consternation
in flight
seeping through my windows
emanating malodorous airs.
Unhappy winds tonight
hurling angry mist
to and fro
pelting nature's creatures
and especially
angering the skunk.
Copyright 2007 Jo Janoski, Poet Laureate of Pennsylvania™ 2007
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Posted: 04:59 PM, August 30, 2007 in Poetry |
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| Wow! Talk about your dedication to a theme... if they're ugly enough to infuriate the skunk, those are some bad vapors! Nice little flippant ending... totally unexpected and delightful. |
Posted by Bubba at 06:42 PM, August 30, 2007 |
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Great Job
dermott
"Seeping through your windows." I like that line it brings the person and the storm together. Like they are meeting eah other one to one. |
Posted by dermott at 07:48 PM, August 30, 2007 |
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skunks???
| it all starts off so somber and then it ends up with pi**ed off skunks!!!! very cool.... |
Posted by paisley at 09:01 PM, August 30, 2007 |
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on your toes
JO
Just keeping you guys on your toes with my skunks...lol |
Posted by JO at 09:15 PM, August 30, 2007 |
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| You had me with malodorous airs... and then you skunked it. great stuff, very witty... |
Posted by hfurness at 02:26 AM, August 31, 2007 |
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Shirley
Beautiful Jo...it sounds like the storm we had last night. |
Posted by Shirley at 06:42 AM, August 31, 2007 |
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