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JO JANOSKI resides in Pittsburgh, PA, USA with her husband, Ron.


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The Mob

For the Musecrafters Workshop, a Shadorma.

The Mob

Black ink spills
like madness set free.
Mob chasing
after prey.
Crude spilling across calm seas
turning it all black.

 


Copyright 2007 Jo Janoski, Poet Laureate of Pennsylvania™ 2007


Posted: 08:22 AM, August 16, 2007 in Poetry

Crude

Good stuff... this is a great use of words. I see it, I feel it, I taste it. I wonder when we'll stop polluting our world with the remnants of other species?

Posted by hfurness at 09:09 AM, August 16, 2007

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Shadorma,
What a great forma
Shadorma.
Performa
quintessential shadorma,
be a reforma.

Okay, yours is better... LOL Nice job, JO...


Posted by Bubba at 11:17 AM, August 16, 2007

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Whatever it takes...

JO
Whatever it takes to make you try more poetry, Bubba!

Posted by JO at 04:18 PM, August 16, 2007

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ozy
Can't say I've ever heard of a Shadorma before. Like the poem though, great imagery.

Posted by ozy at 08:18 AM, August 17, 2007

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the mob

this was excellent... as a lover of the sopranos... i have to say that they definitely caused a few seas to run black... excellent visual....

Posted by paisley at 09:32 PM, August 17, 2007

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Great

dermott
This was really great. The title and poem weaved together beautifully. But I have always enjoyed shadorma.

Posted by dermott at 01:26 PM, August 18, 2007

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