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JO JANOSKI resides in Pittsburgh, PA, USA with her husband, Ron.
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The Dining Room
Writing Workshop Challenge He'll have her...
In response to the Musecrafters Writing Workshop Challenge. An interpretation of the painting below:
The Dining Room
To have our tea, to have our tea
and wonder for a day.
He to dream of her so fine
while I stay out of the way.
He'll have her, he'll have me.
She'll never know my shame.
They'll have a love affair sublime
Perhaps I am to blame.
I'll have my tea, I'll have my tea.
Never to be seem observant.
I'll not see when their eyes meet.
That dirty filthy servant.
Copyright 2007 Jo Janoski, Poet Laureate of Pennsylvania™ 2007
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Posted: 08:46 AM, August 6, 2007 in Poetry |
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The woman scorned...
| Interesting, Jo... I've read four pieces on this now and I've seen four entirely different 'takes' on it. Two lethal components, anger mixed with resignation, fuel a fire that, in all likelihood, is headed for disaster. I've always found it baffling why spouses often tend to focus their hurt and blame on the paramour rather than the partner. Well done, Jo! |
Posted by Bubba at 09:22 AM, August 6, 2007 |
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Great Job
Great job on this assignment. If I'm ever able to login into musecrafters I will do the assignments. But I am about to give up. LOL! Anyway as always i enjoy reading you, and will always check your blog out.
Terry |
Posted by Terry McDermott at 03:59 PM, August 6, 2007 |
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Hi
JO
Terry,
I see you finally got in! Great to see you here! |
Posted by JO at 05:00 PM, August 6, 2007 |
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JO! I finally did it. I just created a new blog on musecrafters! The first I tried here I will have it deleted.
I am so excited! |
Posted by dermott at 05:01 PM, August 6, 2007 |
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Great Job!
HouseMouse
Hi Jo, this is fantastic. Sounds like you saw the same thing I did only different! |
Posted by HouseMouse at 06:10 AM, August 7, 2007 |
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the dining room
very interesting perspective... i just didn't see the lust in fathers eyes i guess......
great poem.. i love the last line!!!! |
Posted by paisley at 08:10 PM, August 7, 2007 |
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